Loved the song. The electronic instrument worked well with the piano in the beginning, and while the vocal performance wasn't technically perfect, it added that human element that you don't get from "perfection". Well done!
Glad you enjoyed it, meep! ^_^
I like the overall sound/feel to it, the weight of the brass. The violin staccato that comes in around 12 seconds sounds awkward to me (just those sudden few notes at the end of the phrase) as I imagine it would also be awkward to play in real life. I'd love to hear some percussion with this!
Yeah, I made the staccato strings a bit unplayable... Well... maybe. I dunno, it may be possible to play if someone tried really damn hard.
As for percussion, there's both bass drum and crash in it, it's tied to the low brass.
Glad you like it though.
Overall, it's a great song! Lots of intensity, really rocks out, love the guitar solos. My only gripe is the vocals seem pushed to far back for my taste. Without the lyrics printed here I wouldn't know half of the words.
Thanks a lot DSykMusic for your kindness good sir!
For me the song really started at 15 sec. You've got a nice groove happening which just gets bigger at 28 secs. I also really like the short "shots" that happened at 41 and 55 secs. The last section (after 1:26 sort of lost me because things just got too complex. If you kept that groove going or maybe just changed it slightly or made it stronger then maybe the complex line in the synth wouldn't have stood out too much. Still, was nice to listen to.
Thanks man. I apolgoise for not answering sooner. I will take your criticism into consideration and I appreciate the review. Cheers!
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